SmithStone
-The story so far-
The concept of produceing a comic strip was tottaly new and akward
for me. The first 20 strips were a 'training ground' for me and it shows.
I jumped around too much in story line, restricted art scale when I should
have expanded and made the story line just about unreadable. None the
less by strip #20 I decided that the story comes first. All strips after
#20 follow a coherent storyline that is easy to read and follow.
Due to the first 20 strips being somewhat 'disjointed' I created this
page to explain what went on in between strips. Here is the recap. Errors
and all, Enjoy!
Richard Raccoon and Amber Fox meet in a bar one night. After a quick
discussion comprised of flirting cliche's they decide to go somewhere
private.
Charles Tiger who has worked many long hours has finished his supper
at his usual diner. There he knows Tiffany, a waitress in which they
have shared many nights and problems of life together. Haveing worked
many long nights he's decided to stay at Tiffany's once again to stave
off the loneliness that he feels.
In a desert far away Cinosanap searches her lands. She contemplates
her life. She is a scout for a patch of desert land spanning many miles.
Being so alone she has become an internet junkie on the remote terminal
hidden within her only abode.
On SmithStone Robyn_of_Woods stands over the edge of a great chasm
thinking about her current situation. She has awoken to find herself
traped in the body of a stylized wooden puppet. She is alone and afraid.
Robin Masquerade scowls Emily for climbing high into the lighthouse
on SmithStone island. Soon something will happen and their roles will
change.
With a silence that belays what happens, everything changes. Some
of our characters will wake up in a strange world. Others will wake
up and discover that their dreams are now reality. Despite the changes
everything has become new and differnt.
Amber and Richard awaken to find themselves on the upper deck of a
strange sailing ship. Looking around the strange ship they soon meet
up with Tiffany and Chuck. In a quick conversation they discover they
have meet the same fate. Both of their groups were traveling when somehow
they were abducted and brought to the ship. Strangely no one remembers
ever being abducted or even how they got to the ship; only that they
woke up on the ship.
Searching the stern of the ship they find the doors to its interior
are locked. Spying a set of doors to the aft they decided to check them.
In route they discover that the ship is not in the water which is hidden
by a fog. They discover that the ship is flying in midair. The fact
frightens Amber who is comforted by Tiffany a little. Charles and Richard
make their way into the forward doors to discover what looks like a
computerized control bridge for the ship. Richard tries to gain access
only to find that the ship's system is password protected. Not only
that but the ship is also on autopilot.
Tiffany yells for them to join them outside. Rejoining the others
they gasp at what they see. Even more amazing than the flying ship itself
is a floating island in the sky. Its mass atop a giant stone like an
upside mountain. Soon the ship 'docks' on the manmade outcroping of
a artifical lake. There they are greeted by some strange people. There
is a strange lady in a mask and another in a somewhat revealing teal
tunic. A small child is with them standing next to a intricate wooden
statue of a cat lady. The masked lady introduces herself as Robin, the
child as Emily, and the young lady in the tunic as Cinosanap. Cinosanap
mentions she preffers being called 'Cino'. She tells her guest that
the floating island is called SmithStone. Robin also indicates that
the wooden statue is also a person, somewhat frozen in place, and is
named Robyn_of_woods.
Somewhat warry of their guest the girls follow Robin up to the house
as Cino talks with Richard about the ship's computer. Robin explains
of a 'reality shift' that occured some time before the group arrived.
She explains how the house's furniture seems to appear and dissapear
at random and how the memories of Cino and Emily also seem to have been
altered. Soon Emily complains that her 'Clock Tower' is locked. It's
her private place on the island, at least untill the reality shift occured.
They soon discover that she is correct and assume that the door opens
to the touch of another's hand. Everyone tries and it leave Robyn the
only person left. Chuck and Robin go down to meet Robyn_of_woods where
she was last frozen. When she awakens they discover that she is quite
emotionally upset as she runs away from them. Later when frozen Emily
removes her arm and uses it as a key. Shocked that Emily would so such
a thing Chuck quickly takes the arm back to Robyn before she wakes up.
Tiffany and Emily soon discover that Emily's once empty clocktower is
now home to someone. It is most likely that it's home to Robyn since
the door only opens to her touch.
Back inside the ship's bridge Cinosanap has broken into the computer
system as Richard watches. She briefs Richard that the ship's system
was striped bare and running on a 'autopilot recording'. Once the recording
was finished the ship began eraseing all records. She tells him that
she can fix it but it will take months and worse yet, she has no map
of where they came from. Cino agrees to fix the ship's programming,
but she can not fill in the map that is missing. With no option Richard
agrees to her help.
A little later the group meets outside the main house. There they
share what they have learned. #1. Cino can repair the ship but it will
take months. #2 They all dislike the items that dissapear and reapear
in the old house. #3 That Cino has offered them room and board untill
the ship is fixed. They all agree on Cino's offer as the reality of
the long stay settles in. That night Cino tells Tiffany of the Reality
Shift that occured before her group arrived. Both Cino and Robyn_of_woods
had a dream of living in SmithStone with Robin and Emily. That they
were acting unlike themselves and many other things. Then they woke
up but discovered that they were still on SmithStone. Cino had always
been a loner and adjusted easily but Robyn_of_woods didnt. Robyn had
once been a living person in her home world and now she was traped within
the body of a stylized wooden pupet.
The next day Charles and Richard go to investigate the Main house
to discover that it's full of furniture. Even more supriseing is that
none of it ever seems to dissapear or reappear. They agree that it's
stable and soon the group moves into the house. With only 3 bedrooms
and Richard hardly knowing Amber the Decision is easy. Emily gets one
room to herself while the men and wemon share seperate rooms. This doesn't
prevent them from being themselve's at all though. Soon they realize
that they are somewhat at ease with the setup except for oe of them.
Robyn_of_woods is still emotionally traumatized. Emily with her teenage
personality traped in the body of a 7 year old makes her mischevious
known. She watches Amber pull Richard into the girls room and does 1+1=2.
Since it was theroized that a slap in the face might bring Robyn out
of her trauma, Emily decided to haul Robyn's frozen wooden form up in
front of the Girls room. While explaining her plan to Charles Robyn
walks downstairs in a much more stable state. She tells the two that
what she heard comeing from within the girls room was quite suitable
for a 1-900 telephone number.
Much later Robin is showing Amber the cave complex behind the house.
Amber is quite suprised to find that it was built long before Emily
or Robin showed up at SmithStone. Robin explains that it was built in
tribute to the original owners love for his wife, his daughter, and
his eastern religion. Amber ask more about the original owners whereas
Robin goes silent. Mocking that someone might have died there Amber
presses Robin to tell more. The resulting seriousness and silence from
Robin unerves her. Returning back to the main house Amber finds Chuck
and Tiffany reading a book together closely. It's obvious that they're
verry comfortable around each other. She ask them if they knew about
the original owner's. Tiffany interupts Amber's sentence to tell that
she found a history book about SmithStone. The book tells how the original
owner's (we'll call them the Smiths) daughter died of the flu in the
children's room upstairs. It also tells how his second wife fell to
her death trying to climb down the chasm wall. No more than a year later
Mr. Smith died when he sliped on the stone bridge and fell to his death.
The three listen as Tiffany reads the intersting points out of the book.
Elsewhere Richard follows the sounds of swimming. It leads him down
a tunnell in the basement, across a stone bridge spanning the chasm
and into a small roman styled room with a wadeing pool. There he stumbles
across Cino' swimming in the nude. Startled he turns away from her while
she rest's near the edge of the pool. Cino' apologizes, explaining how
nudity is commonplace on her home planet, even in public. Curious Richard
asks what she did on her home world as an occupation. She explains how
she scouts a remote desert for people landing ilegally on the planet.
Richard compares it to being a 'meter maid' and she agrees with a happy
expression.
Leaving Charles to read more about the history of SmithStone, Tiffany
wanders off to find Rob-wood. She finds her in her newly discovered
home, the clock tower. There Robyn explains how her 'freezing up' is
the same as falling asleep. She even tells that she can choose to go
'limp' instead of 'freezing' when she snoozes. Though interesting Tiffany
really wants to know who Robyn really is. The person Robyn used to be
before waking up on SmithStone, traped inside the wooden body. Robyn
used to be a sales representative at an electronics store and a social
recluse. Describeing herself as a recluse and a computer geek, Tiffany
decides its time for Robyn to get out and have some fun.
Back at the wadeing pool Cino learns that Richard was once a bookish
librarian on his own world. Having heard Richards and Ambers loud lovemakeing
earlier in the day she cant resist asking him about Amber. He tells
how he met Amber at a single bar the night of the abduction. As for
true love, he simply doesn't know Amber personally enough to make a
call on that.
Amber was tired. She had become board trying to find any clue of hauntings
about SmithStone in its history book. Even Charles tried to help her
find some but couldn't. Following the sounds of Richard's voice she
finds him at the wading pool; with a naked Cinosanap. In this crazy
world where she thought she could confide in Richard; he was with another
woman. She became so upset she burst into tears and fled back to the
bedroom.
With Richard the apparent guilty party in Ambers eyes, Cino demanded
to talk to her first. Still naked she follows Amber back to her room
and confronts her. Amber calls her a pervert and for a moment Cino's
statment stings back. There both traped on the island, either they talk
it out now or let it fester into a bitter rivalry. Cino explains how
richard walked in on her, and how nothing happened. Amber points out
Cino's nudity. Cino explains that she was born on a world where nudity
is publicly acceptable. That she was raised that way and was too stubborn
to change. Amber almost smiles as she ask Cino not to play head games
with the guys by useing her nudisty lifestle against them. Cino agrees
and at least hatred is advoided.
Charles was curious when he heard Amber and Cino run upstairs and
didn't think much of it for a while. Hearing someone walking downstairs
and curious about what happens he goes into the main hall to ask. There
he meets Cino walking down the stairs tottaly naked. He is thouroughly
distracted as Cino explains what happened between her and Amber. After
a moment or two he tears his eyes away from Cino's body and think on
what she said. He agrees with her words and is still somewhat distracted
as Tiffany and Robyn enter the hallway.
Tiffany is quite suprised by Cino's nudity. She had thought that Cino
was jokeing when she mentioned it the day before. She didn't expect
to see Cino walking around in the buff. Even worse, she discovers that
Chuck seems frozen and brainless in Cino's nude presence. With a few
good reminding jabs She 'convinces' him to loan Cino his shirt.
Cino and Chuck walk back to the pool to meet with richard when a foghorn
sounds. Cino explains that the foghorn was hooked up to her computer.
It's sound indicates that her computer found a building block to the
ships system. The ship's computer system is rather high tech and she
explains that even with a good piece of the ship's system restored that
it would take at least 3 monts to fix. Disaponted at having his hopes
falsely risen; Chuck decides to join Tiff' and Robyn in a game of cards.
Meanwhile Richard decides to join Cino to her computer system to investigate
the discovery.
Chuck joins Amber, Tiffany and Robyn_of_woods in a game of Mahjongg.
The conversation primarily goes back and forth between Amber and Tiffany
about their love relationships. At one point Tiffany 'suggests' that
Chuck leave. Alone amoung the girls, Amber ask Tiffany if she has a
chance with Richard. Tiffany agrees that Amber does have a chance, but
that it will take time. Chuck renters the room and ask if anyone would
like pasta for dinner. Everyone agrees and the game continues.
In Cino's computer room Richard begins to get bored. Talking with
Cino he learns that there is a one-way internet connection with the
outside world. Unfortunately this means that they can not send any messages
out at all. It does help though. With the download capability, they
can download books to read, and games to play. At the mention of games,
Richard challenges Cino to a one-on-one deathmatch in a 3d shooter game.
After defeating Cino a few times, she realizes that Richard is quite
good. She then ask's if he realizes that Amber is in love with him.
He knows but remains silent. Cino points out that richard is afraid
of Ambers openess. She tells him that she once had a similar offer for
true love and let that kind fear take it away from her. She doesnt want
Richard to follow her mistakes. Richard barks back, admiting that he
is afraid of Amber but that he also likes Cino too. Cino breaks up crying
and shoves Richard away. She explains that her emotions are more unstable
than usuall from not getting enough sleep. That she's been working long
and hard on the Ship's computer system too much. She ask Richard for
some time alone to herself and he reluctantly agrees. As he travels
down the hallway he realizes how hard Cino's been working. He also realizes
that if theyr'e stuck on SmithStone for a long time that he really ought
to apologize to Amber. That he can't advoid her forever on such a small
island.
Back at the Main house Amber meets Chuck in the kitchen to inspect
his pasta. She asks Chuck for a sealed bowl of Pasta for her to take
to chuck. As she steps out the door with it Richard greets her at the
doorstep. They apologize to each other. Amber asking forgiveness for
her overeaction and Richard for not being more aware of his growing
relationship with Amber. Eating seperately from the rest of the group
in the kitchen they enjoy their meal. They also agree to some rather
adult activities after supper.
That Night Emily is awoken from her bed by the sounds of Richard and
Amber having sex. She isn't the small girl everyone thinks she looks
like. She's really a 13 (or older) person stuck in a 7 year old's body.
So shes familiar with whats going on and is rather upset that its too
loud and that she needs to get to sleep. She pounds on the door and
there are several pounds back on the wall. as if a headboard were pounding
against it. She shouts a few times as Chuck and Tiffany join in the
liticious noise makeing from their own room. Emily grouches as she goes
to bed, planning her revenge.
The next morning Tiffany and Chuck awake beside one another in realization
of their situation. Theyv'e long loved each other, but their jobs kept
them apart. Now that there traped on an island together they have an
oportunity. Tiffany ask Chuck to drop the subject. She believes that
they will get back home, soon. The believes that if they get any closer
than they normally are, that going home will pull them apart and that
the pain will be too much for them emotionally.
In Richard and Amber's room the pair is startled as Robin pops in
to clean up. She informs them that Emily planed a 'flying tour' of smithstone
for them all. Richard chides Amber that its Emily's way of getting even
for their noise makeing.
Fear, pure fear. Richard flys high above smithstone dangeling from
a rope while Robyn_of_woods flys them both around the island. Amber
gets a similar experience in Emilys rather tiny flying boat. A boat
that has no seatbelts of any kind. While having their 'fun' Chuck and
Tiffany watch below. They're so glad they overslept in comparison to
Amber and Richard. As this all occurs 3 blast's of the Lighthouse's
fog horn sounds. Cino has had another computer breakthrough in repairing
the ships computer system.
Gathering at the stone docks near the lake Cino informs them that
the computer is repaired. All they need to do is find some fuel for
the engine, find home, and there gone. As they depart Chuck motions
with his eyes to Tiffany. He relays a message that he doesn't want to
go home because he loves tiffany so much. He wants to stay. But the
message is a silent one, no one hears it, except for Tiffany.
With everyone split up looking for fuel Amber and Chuck are alone.
Amber ask chuck if they will ever get back to their world, not Cino's.
She also ask if he likes SmithStone, and her. He finds SmithStone a
weird place and Amber attractive. Caught up in the moment of possibly
going home Amber and Chuck kiss passionately. Only to space themselves
from one another a moment after. They both have people they love but
somehow they are attracted to each other. Somewhat uncomfortable with
what just happened they split up to continue their search.
Elsewhere Tiffany continues to search rooms for fuel pods. Only finding
several bedrooms one after the other. Disgruntled she begins to think
of food. Back in the control room Richard and Cino check out the computer
system. She explains how the system she was trying turned out to be
the control pannel subsystem. Once her computer maped a door switch
she tried it out. At that point the main system identified an error
in the control system and fixed the entire control system. Once the
control system was back and running Cino had full access to the ship's
functions. Though only listening halfway Richard shows more intrest
in Cino's VR sphere. Or spheres as he puts it with a slip of the tounge.
At that point Cino ask if he could help the other to find any fuel pods,
and of course for some food. Somewhat embarrased and 'caught' in his
line of thinking he akwardly agrees and wanders off to search for fuel.
We now take you to the archives, because the story's more refined there
now...
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